All right, you asked about “the secret music and math I tuck into most of my writing even though I know most readers won’t know it’s there,” soooooo…
Well, with The Biographies of Ordinary People the music was obvious. I literally gave you every piece the Gruber sisters played or sang or listened to, and tried to give you enough context to understand the story even if you didn’t know the music (though I secretly hoped you’d listen to at least some of it on your own, and if you were part of my Patreon when I was drafting the book I gave you an actual playlist).
The math was less obvious, though it was also right in front of you if you knew to look for it.
The story begins on Rosemary Gruber’s 35th birthday and ends on Meredith Gruber’s 35th birthday.
There are four parts, each with 35 chapters.
Part 1 covers three years (1989–1992); then we skip five years.
Part 2 covers three years (1997–2000); then we skip four years.
Part 3 covers five years (2004–2009). It was only supposed to cover four, both halves of Biographies Vol. 2 were supposed to cover four years each, but I really wanted the three Gruber sisters to meet up at the Obama inauguration, which I mistakenly entered as “January 2008” in my initial outline. (When I realized it had really taken place during January 2009, I thought about making the inauguration its own little section, so I could keep the two parts at exactly four years each. Then I decided nobody would care about it but me.)
Then we skip three years.
Part 4 covers four years (2012–2016).
YES I KNOW THAT’S NOT “MATH MATH”
IT’S JUST NUMBERS
But that’s what I do when I make stuff (writing or, in my previous career, songs). There’s always some kind of scaffolding holding the thing together — go read the author’s note at the end of Frugal and the Beast if you want to see how I constructed each of the stories in that collection, for example.
Now let’s go even deeper.
I read everything I write aloud. In fact, I say most of it aloud before I ever put it on the page. Say it to yourself, if you want:
The last night before they left was Rosemary Gruber’s thirty-fifth birthday.
It’s in 4/4 time.
“Rosemary Gruber” has the same number of syllables, and the same stresses, as “thirty-fifth birthday.”
I took a first-page critique class while I was drafting the novel, and one of the other students helpfully suggested that the opening sentence would be tighter if it were “The night before they left was Rosemary Gruber’s thirty-fifth birthday.”
I’m not going for tight. I’m going for a line that you can speak as though it were a song. So it has to be last, to keep the rhythm of the sentence and the assonance with left.
Next we have “It had, of course, been her birthday since the morning, and the girls had duly remembered to call out ‘Happy birthday, mommy!’ when they came out of the bedroom.”
Been her birthday
Since the morning
You see the rhythm, don’t you? It’s right there. The words couldn’t be anything but what they were, or it would spoil it.
And the GIRLS had DU-ly re-MEM-bered to CALL out. Read it aloud. Read the whole thing aloud. You’ll hear it.
And that, my dear readers, is the secret music.
Are you glad you asked? ❤️